markc
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Just wanted to second everything Jon said there.JonK said:The pose in the first is killer; the flat light in the second showcases her face beautifully; also a nice pose.
I'd crop her shoulder from the right side in the last one. It is drawing away from the rest of the image.
Also I feel you should rethink the lighting so that yer catching her eyes more...some reflection up into them would be nice just to put a catchlight in them.