Portrait session for school assignment.

[prodigy2k7]

First time using professional flash equipment and photographing another person in this atmosphere. I am in school and this was my assignment.
Here are a few photos from it.

http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/8940/img9020t.jpg

http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/7732/img8982j.jpg

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/6804/img8914b.jpg

 

[tropico]

The two first one is great! Perfect light!
The third one look a little bit dark, and her eyes are not "popping". I would have loved to see some more light in her eyes.

 

[GotaLuvThosPens]

i agree with above. These shots are great for your experience level! You need some fill light to help lighten the shadows under her brows and nose.
Did you do some skin smoothing?? Her skin look awesome.

 

[DC-Photog]

You have great control over your lighting.

So many people overlook adequate background and hair light for separation. You did a great job.

 

[Bram]

I agree with all the comments above, great eye for the camera and if this really was your first time using pro equipment good on ya. One thin g I got though, is it just me or is the left side of the photo in #1 a little OOF? The waving hair seems a little off to me, if that were in focus all these would be flawless. Just my 2 cents.

 

[Robin Usagani]

I do wish I went to a photography school instead of engineering . Good job.. My only comment is that you can see the wrinkle a bit on the red background on the last one. I would clone that out.