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Discussion in 'The Professional Gallery' started by df3photo, Dec 15, 2005.

  1. df3photo

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  2. Artemis

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    I love them but...I feel they are a little flat...some extra contrast would really help I feel...
     
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    Thanks Artemis, I agree that they need something done there...

    anyone else want to comment??? please... I hear critiqueing other peoples photography helps them become better photographers....
     
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    Try some curves and levels do...infact...mind if I download these and do some editing, then re upload them?
     
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    Help yourself, I appreciate it!
     
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    After reading the post I was reminded that after I came home from the bar lastnight I fooled around with one of the pics... here it is...
    [​IMG]

    I should redo levels and all that on the others though...
     
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    Not bad, the color looks a little funky on #4 but i like the others.
     
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    Thanks jcharcalla...
     
  9. JonK

    JonK I want MORE!!

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    #3 is my fave.
    I would convert to BW, boost the contrast and do some soft glow; but very subtle.
    I played with this one and it looked nice. :D
     
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    I hope you don't mind as I'm not in the habit of editing other photoraphers photos but I thought I would give it a go. I find the colors very cold so I warmed them up a little.

    [​IMG]

    I could not help but also try it in B/W

    [​IMG]

    Cheers,

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    Hey Thanks, yea my color wasnt very good at all... I think I just finally got tiard of looking at them after I scanned them and spotted them and didnt to much on the color end...
    Thanks for the comments and edit JonK and AIRIC, its always appreciated!
     
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    Excellent work! I particularly like the motion of her hair. Again; maybe a little more contrast. Hats are tough in that they create a shadow over the eyes. You did a good job of alleviating that.
     

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