Re-Ducks again

[cande56755]

Please critique these 2 photos.
Canon A720 IS
newbie

 

[cande56755]

Please critique
Canon A720 IS

 

[MHarvey]

I saw your first duck post, and this is a vast improvment. the angle is much better, and you've got good sharpness. Really like the first one, wish you could see the mallard hens head, I think a tight crop to focus less on the coots and more on the mallards would help alot. I like the second one as well, just minus the coots again. but would be harder to crop them out in the second one. great job

 

[cande56755]

Ya I think you're right. Thanks for comments.

 

[cande56755]

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