self portrait

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by noob873, Dec 18, 2007.

  1. noob873

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    Anyone?
     
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    While I like the idea, I'd like to see more of the actual subject instead of black...
     
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    Great concept....... but my opinion is that your eye should be in focus. If your goal for this shot is for the ear phones and a partial face are to be in forcus you need a better aperture (higher) or step back from the subject. Also the white balance picks up too much red tones. There are a few hot spots from your flash. The black hair blends a little too much with the background and doesn't show enough depth.

    Over all I like the concept and composition ......if it was just a bit clearer.
     
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    Maybe sometime I will try taking it again. ;)
    I actually used a desklamp for my lighting, I dont like using the on camera flash.
    And I never realized how much my eye was out of focus compared to the headphone until you pointed that out. :lol:
     

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