Self Portrait

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  1. AudioInjectedSoul

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    Yeah, just me with flat hair and a few quotes really, just the norm. What do you think?

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    hmm i dont really like the writing, perhaps its the font or something but it doesnt appeal to me, also the thing in the bottom left is distracting, i cant tell what it is so maybe a tighter crop would help


    i like the noise and the b and w, good shot
     
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    I like the concept, but really don't like the one on top of your head. If you cut that out I think I'd like it better. But that may ruin the concept? I might like it without any of the writing too.
     
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    andrea...i think its a tattoo on his arm
     
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    I don't know what that thing is! It freaked me out when I saw it! Ok, next time I do a portrait, I'll make sure I save one without quotes for you lot!

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