Shots of grandkids

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by rbraden, Jan 17, 2009.

  1. rbraden

    rbraden TPF Noob!

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    One of my first posts here. Any comments or critiques would be welcome.
    Thanks in advance.

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  2. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    I think in your granddaughter's eyes I can just about see what light you had set up for these ;) ... but that photo has too much headroom. She's somehow "squished" to the bottom of the frame.

    And well, that other person's hands in your grandson's photo ... it would just be so much more HIS photo if there weren't his mom's (?) hands in there arranging his coat...

    Just two quick thoughts of mine on these... I'm no expert on lighting nor portraiture...
     

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