Single Portrait...C&C Welcomed

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by Ub3rdoRK, May 15, 2010.

  1. Ub3rdoRK

    Ub3rdoRK TPF Noob!

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    shot with D700 w/ 70-200vr @ ƒ2.8 1/160 with on camera sb900 bounced at ISO 400. Slight modification in Viveza to darken and simple complexion adjustments.


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    I like this, but im not too sure about the focus. I see that it is focuses on the face, which is great, but my attention is drawn to the pink in the center. I'd like to see a little more focus toward the middle but other than that, a nice shot :)
     
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    D-B-J Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    i like it, but it almost seems slightly too dark.
     
  4. Ub3rdoRK

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    I feel it's a little too dark as well. As for the focus...I see what you mean but I kinda wanted a feel of mysteriousness lol if that makes sense. Because her stockings are barely showing as well.
     
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    a different attempt at this...i think i like this one better.

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    cnutco No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    ^This one looks very nice! Not sure what the first one looked like... it is gone.
     
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    Oh crap I forgot I deleted the other one from flickr :-/. Sorry
     
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    I dig the pose and eyes but how do I say this.... er, something draws me away from her eyes to her chest. Knocking down the exposure on the chest would make it perfect for me.
     
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    ive gotten other opinions as well...one i found that i need to fix....is the definition of the chin. It blends too much with the chest, maybe thats why it leads away from the face?
     

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