Skate'n at the wash house

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  1. Rdigital

    Rdigital TPF Noob!

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    me and my friend just went to the wash house and did our idea for her first shoot with me..

    we was just bored that day


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    I like the idea, however nothing from the shot is really "jumping out" at me and grabbing my attention.

    Another note, not specific to this picture is how big/intrusive your watermark is.
     
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    Cool pic, I like it
     
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    I like the photo. Critiques from me would be that the tilting of the picture IMO nearly always looks a bit stupid. I think it would look better straight. Also the aforementioned watermark is very intrusive. If you're not planning on going pro within the near future, don't bother doing a watermark.

    My 2 cents
     
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    I really like it! I like how she is standing...I like the location and the b/w tones....and the tilt of the photo. I don't like the watermark either though.
     
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    thanks alot, i made a new logo just text base this is old.

    but thanks for the feed
     

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