Sooo dark..

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  1. ilyfel

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    Please cc welcome.

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    Yeah I noticed taht thing on her nose after i posted... ill just have to edit it out.
     
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    perhaps fix that nose thing that's goin on...maybe a small spot on her chin...but that depends on what you're goin for.

    I like it a lot, actually.
    Cool hair.

    Wait...that's not you, is it?
     
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    No.. I took that pic... a while ago...

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    lol i wish i was as pretty as her
     
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    I think it's kind of distracting where she is placed in the photo. She is looking into dead space/area, and it's too center weighted. Perhaps if she was simply placed on the left hand side, it would make the photo much more lovely.
     
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    theres my edit.. i know, i know.. its not that great.
     
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    Were you going for the orange skin look? I know it looks almost like evening light, sort of like sodium vapor bulbs. I think if it were mine, I would shift the color a little to a more yellow/less orange tint. Not much, just enough to loose the campfire look, unless that is what you were going for. JMO.
     
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    i actually like this shot ok, i would have put her more to the left of the picture and not so centered though. good job
     

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