the hurt of an unreturned love

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by neogfx, Mar 15, 2007.

  1. neogfx

    neogfx TPF Noob!

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    Comments please.

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  2. theheater

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    Not sad enough... but excellent shot!
     
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    I agree with theheater on this one.
     
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    The picture is well-composed, well focussed, etc but you are trying to make a point with the title that the picture doesn't show. The picture then becomes an illustration to the text.
     
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    I like the composition, but it's too bright to convey your feeling. You have nice texture in the brick and stairs, I would probably crop the white ceiling out. If it was darker, I think it would be more brooding.
     
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    The best advice I can give is make the subject dwarfed by a bleak scene, or make the subject fill the frame and have him be more expressive.
     

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