the tacks at sunset

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  1. immski

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    Here are some pics i took at the train tracks near my college. These are the ones we could take before the cops came and kicked us out of there.
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    Thanks for looking. PLEASE PLEASE tell me what you think and these are open to critique and editing.
     
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    I like the last one a lot, as well as the second. They could all do with a little curves and level editing, as well as cropping... and the one with your shadow...well, has your shadow in it. ;) Good job though =)
     
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    you have some blown areas, sunspots and shadow issues, but a good series no doubt.
    love that second one a lot!
     
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    #6 :thumbup:
     
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    I don't like the blown out sky in the first one. But the rest are nice. Nice work.
     
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    #1 and #2 would be pretty good if there weren't so much flare.
     
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    You REALLY dared getting close to the tracks for these!!! Wow. I would not have been so brave (nor have I ever been, and I have taken my share of "Tracks at Sunset" photos, too ;) ).

    I think Photo 2 is my favourite because it nicely brings out both sky and tracks.
    And I like the almost self-portrait in Photo 5. That one is funny.
     
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    just be carefull in the fourth with your shadow
     
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    The last one is definitely the best.
     
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    The last one rules! I only wish it was a bit straighter...
     

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