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  1. ShootingYou

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    Shot with a Nikon FG, using Kodak 400TX film.
     
  2. molested_cow

    molested_cow No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Hmmm..... I think we need more variety of angles to give a more accurate comment.... :p

    I like it. Very distinctive focal point but the model still look as a whole.
     
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    that help? :wink:
     
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    molested_cow No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Hmmmm you lucky bastard! :D

    Very nice. I like the softness of the B/W.
     
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    ShootingYou TPF Noob!

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    Thanks. Why exactly am I so lucky?
     
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    molested_cow No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Because I only get to draw them and not take photos:(

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    First image much stronger...very nice...love the DOF and the oblique lighting

    ...and yes, you are one lucky bastard. She's gorgeous
     
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    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    Woa cow you are extremely skilled guy :) *about those pictures of course* :p hyhy and don't panic :) everytime you can order a "scarlet woman" to take some photos :p
     
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    I like the second photo better. On the first one your eyes just stop at the head. Whereas the second one leads your eyes from the head to the legs.
     
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    thanx!

    You got a scarlet? :p
     
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    Don't compress your image so much. There is SEVERE artifacting in the shadows. So much so that I thought she had a tattoo on her shoulder! The files are both under 10k, my photos at that resolution are around 80k. Just a suggestion.
     
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    I'm confused as to what you were thinking looked like a tattoo. According to photoshop on my comp, they're around the 70 K mark.
     

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