Three scenes, storybook sky

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  1. audiobomber

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    C&C please?

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    I think #2 could have been great if you stepped in front of the bushes and small trees to get a cleaner view of the field.
     
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    I agree with the above comment and also add the sky is completely blown out, you should have underexposed it a bit during processing.
     
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    I thought it was considered good form to leave some foreground in the shot. Now that you mention it though, it is pretty brushy looking.
     
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    Try something like this:
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    The sky got a little messed up, sorry.
     
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    I kind of like the cartoonish sky, but how about this one?

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    I think the saturation helps, but I also think you have a dirty sensor.
     
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    Holy crap, you're right. I have a dust removal program in the camera, and I've been so careful. I've only had the camera three months, this is disappointing.
     
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    Thank god for photoshop. Get yourself a Giotto Rocket blower ... a small investment to save yourself alot of grief.
     
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    Are you sure this dust is in the camera on the image sensor? It's probably on one ends of your lens...
     
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    Good point, I'll look there first.
     
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    ... looks like sensor glop to me, but I agree that you should check the lens before driving yourself crazy...
     

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