I would like it if you shot this portait-style to get more water in the shot and hopefully the horizon line. Here it just seems like your pointing straight down, not the best composition.
Well, since it depicts something which I like, and where alot of emotions are associated with, I like it in a way.
But if I cast all that aside, I cannot find too much special about it. There are lots of lost highlights, overexposed, and the composition is ... a bit dull. There are no interesting lines and there is no point where the eye would rest on or concentrate on.
A good example of a composition which follows what some people call "rule of thirds" ...
I do not want to sound like a prick, so don't get me wrong or take it personal