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  1. er111a

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    First one doesn't do much for me, but I like the DOF and composition of the second. The only thing is the brightness of the background is a little distracting.
     
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    Both are nice. In the first one you may wanna try losing the building on the right - especially the white stairs toward the right bottom corner, not sure what can you do about the car parking in front of the building :)

    Second one is more of an art, just as Moe said the background is a little bright.

    great job !
     
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    1. This photo does not do all that much for me. Though the building is interesting. I just don't feel like much thought went into the composition. I do like the high contrast processing.

    2. I like this shot, I find is very interesting. The brightness in the background doesnt bother me..
     
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    Not a fan of #2 like the rest, but #1 interesting in my opinion. My advice if you happen to go back and reshoot is to move more to the left, the ground makes the building look like it's on a horizontal bow.
     
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