Various Pictures, please critique! (;

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  1. alessandralove

    alessandralove TPF Noob!

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    Hi, I'm a newbie, and thought I'd post some recent pictures that I had taken. Hah, don't be too harsh on me! (;

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    This was taken in Bucks County, Pennsylvania. It's some sort of tree with Lichen on it, haha. I really like this one because of the depth on field, the focused background, and the sun was about to begin setting, so the colors were quite vivid.

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    This was some passing christmas tree lights that were around my town. I used a very slow shutter speed, and just wiggled the camera around. I have more like this, some busier than others.

    Give me your worst! (; (All taken with a Nikon D40!)
     
  2. sarallyn

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    I don't have critique, I just thought it was funny that I was testing my Nikon D90 yesterday and came out with this;

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    I effed the DOF up, so I didn't do anything with it... I just thought it was a funny coincidence. :)
     
  3. Sulfur

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    #1- definitely lacking something. I find my eyes heading towards the aqua blue growth. Then I wonder what the use of the rest of the picture is. Definitely crop it up there.
    #2- It's pretty decent. Not really much to comment on, it just looks fine.
     
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    I agree with Sulfur. I get this alot in my photos as well but, these are lacking a point of interest. THeres nothing to look at. I like the dof thing too but, the focus point needs to be something of interest for the viewer. Not too harsh I hope.
     
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    Hah! Very cool! I like yours a lot!

    To everyone else:

    Thank you very much! Now I have a goal for my shoot tomorrow! (;
     
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    Wonderful shot
     

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