Water(flow/fall)

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    Any feedback, good, bad, stuff you like; stuff you dont..

    Any??
     
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    The photo seems pretty evenly split between bright and shadowy area's. Unless the shape of the transition between the two area's complement your subject, I would re shoot form a different angle. Preferably in all shadow. That way, along with a small aperture you could really slow down the shutter speed and make the chaotic waterfall take on some shape.

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    The twigs in the foreground are really distracting. Personally if I'm going to have something in the foreground, it would be in a shape to "frame" the subject (the waterfall). I know it's tough getting a good shot without stuff in the way sometimes.

    Other than that, the shape of the water just before it spills over is pleasant. I would re shoot to make the curve in the spot more prominent.
     
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    i personally wouldve stopped down the lens and used a longer shutter speed to get the same exposure but with the water looking smooth. Like said above, shoot from the shawdow, and the second one would be a pretty nice shot without the twigs, good work though, keep shooting!
     
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    Very amazing advice, thank you!!

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    I couldnt get any closer or around it.. I was taking it from a place that was blocked (i couldnt get any closer)
     
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    My camera (Olympus FE-190) doesnt give that good of a long shutter speed, but i will try it next time :)
     
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    Your use of foreground in two is a good compositional trick I like that. I can't work up much interest for the first one but thats probably just me,
     
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    I think they are both nice, but I agree with you ALOT mysteryscribe
     
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    Jay Jay...

    Pic #1 U have some blown spots in this, due to shooting a waterfall in the sun,, difficult to pull off.. even with polarizer.. in the first shot, there is nothing included to show scale... I don't know if you were trying for a cotton candy effect, or just to capture the motion of the water?? need to shoot something like this on a overcast day... or at least when sun is not on falling water... because exp. / you won't win with sun on falling water, pick a different time of day


    Pic #2...This is good other then foreground distractions ( Branches_ )

    I think you can see for yourself what the water will do when not shot in sunlight...on this shot... you have some filtered sun, but look at the actual fall here , you can see some filtered highlights of the sun, but it is mostly shaded... therefore your water is starting to go with a semi cotton candy type of appearance ( Showing a blur type water motion).. not to shaby on this one
     
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    I like the 2nd photo more.

    Mahalo, Kristen
     

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