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Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by Darfion, Jul 31, 2003.

  1. Darfion

    Darfion Soapbox guru...

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    Your thoughts please. I'm in two minds.
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    Not a big fan of the excessive (imo) border, but other than that, the photo looks good.
     
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    Nice subject matter. I generally like the built in frame, but I think it may be too big here. but I like the waterfall and the plants add a little mystery to the waterfall. Also I like the the flat water above the waterfall.
     
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    Darren ya ol' schizophrenic!
    It looks great but personally I would have preferred a little more waterfall and a little less fern but others may like it the way it is.
    Very good no matter what.
     
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    So what're your two minds?
     
  6. Darfion

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    My two minds are 1; Is the composition ok, as I am still trying to learn the basics of it.
    2; Oh I don't know, I think it's just the composition side of it. :roll:
    I agree with the comments about the border, it is a little too big.
    Thanks guys you've given me a bit more to think about, which is a good thing.
     
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    Darfion
    I hate to rain on this but the border is waaaay too big and not necessary. The firns as a border around the falls is the right idea and would be all the border this shot needs. I would like to have see more of the waterfall and less of the firns. Also a little overexposed.
    Here is a link that shows some basic compisition rules. Check out a bit more at this site as there is more than what I linked to here.
    I hope this helps.
    http://www.betterphoto.com/exploring/tips/thirds.asp
     
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    Darren, just remember the link between opinions and armpits!
     
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    It's a little cluttered with no real focal point. The background and foreground blend into each other.
     
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    Thanks for all your comments. :wink:
     

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