well... something

[mmaria]

went for a walk the other day....

 

[oldhippy]

OH. I Like This. Nice,nice, nice. Ed

 

[mmaria]

OH. I Like This. Nice,nice, nice. Ed

oh Ed, what would I do without you here?

 

[limr]

I like the textures and patterns in this a lot, though I would have cropped from the top - just to the strip above the window. It feels a little crowded at the top, and I also find myself unsatisfied by the broken symmetry of the V shape above and below the window. I find myself paying more attention to that than to the lovely textures of the vines and the window itself.

Only small nitpicks though.

 

[mmaria]

I like the textures and patterns in this a lot, though I would have cropped from the top - just to the strip above the window. It feels a little crowded at the top, and I also find myself unsatisfied by the broken symmetry of the V shape above and below the window. I find myself paying more attention to that than to the lovely textures of the vines and the window itself.

Only small nitpicks though.

completely understand... I was actually thinking about all you mentioned here but still decided to go for it

... nothing about this old house was symmetric and simple to shoot... especially because I didn't have the space to move around and shoot as I wish.... annoying

 

[sm4him]

I'm looking at it on my phone. I'll look again when I get home but from what I can tell on this little screen:
1. I like it a lot.
2. I agree with Leonore. And I think the shot is absolutely worth working on.

 

[astroNikon]

I love the textures, patterns and composition alot.
I thought it was black and white until I saw the green of the small vines, especially the moss in the upper left.

 

[snowbear]

I like the angles. I just wish you could have backed up a little. Could you shoot it again with a wider lens?

 

[tirediron]

Very nice - in addition to the cropping comments, have you tried to dial back the contrast & highlights a smidge?

 

[bribrius]

Very nice - in addition to the cropping comments, have you tried to dial back the contrast & highlights a smidge?

I am with this, the processing seems a bit much it is bright but not really showing the textures and details well (least not on my screen)

 

[Forkie]

Marija, I'm not giving any critique until you tell me what happened to your avatar.

 

[bribrius]

Marija, I'm not giving any critique until you tell me what happened to your avatar.

she got upset I thought she was bisexual I think...

which I kind of still wish I thought she was, even if it was only for the fantasy.

 

[sleist]

I think you went a bit too far with the de-saturation for my taste.
Maybe a bit too crunchy on the sharpening.
I'm not on board with the composition.

And yet, it's still comment worthy ....

Perhaps the worst of misses ...

... near.

 

[mmaria]

first of, I don't like you guys anymore!

that's it!

leaving tpf!

 

[mmaria]

I'm looking at it on my phone. I'll look again when I get home but from what I can tell on this little screen:
1. I like it a lot.
2. I agree with Leonore. And I think the shot is absolutely worth working on.

yeah ... we all agree with Leo

I love the textures, patterns and composition alot.
I thought it was black and white until I saw the green of the small vines, especially the moss in the upper left.

oh, you didn't say anything wrong. I still like you then

and I didn't de-saturate a thing! (regarding sleist's comment)

I like the angles. I just wish you could have backed up a little. Could you shoot it again with a wider lens?

ok.... give me a wider lens and we'll see what can I do

I couldn't backed up because the house is in a specific hilly terrain, next to the road and river that is much lower (if I knew English a bit more I would explain you nicely)
I was trying to get the shot of the whole hose because it's a magnificent old house, scary. I managed to take some kind of a shot, almost standing in the river, but haven't still edited it