16 year old photographer - Favourite photos from a walk - Almost got hit by a train.

[JeremyD]

Greetings everyone!

I haven't been on the forum in so many months, I have changed so much as a photographer and as a person. My style as a photographer has developed so much since I last posted so here are some of my favourite photographs from last month.

For full story on the train shot visit my blog : jeremydalyphoto.com

I am looking for feedback, suggestions, what you don't like vs what you don't etc on these three photographs.


1)
This photograph was taken in multiply exposures merged into a HDR image using Photomatix, then being adjusted in Light Room, then exported to Photoshop for further sharpening and touch ups.

This photograph was taken with:
Canon t4i
8mm fisheye
Taken with a tripod

Canada-Ontario-Sunset-Landscape-Jeremy-Daly-Photography by Jeremy Daly Photography, on Flickr

I was a good distance away from the train so I was safe.

Edited in Lightroom and Photoshop
Canon t4i
18-55 kit lens
Taken with a tripod
30 second exposure


Jeremy-Daly-Photography-Train-Passing by Jeremy Daly Photography, on Flickr

Gear:
Canon t4i
18-55 kit lens
Taken with a tripod

Baden-Ontario-House-JeremyDalyPhotography by Jeremy Daly Photography, on Flickr

 

[sashbar]

Nos 1 and 3 look OK, but overprocessed and therefore cartoonish.
As for your train shot, I think (seriously) you have to tell your mum about this "crazy experience", and she will most probably give you a proper feedback.