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I like B&W and portraits...CC is welcomed.
 

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Nice photo. I like the background and the contrast with the head. A couple of comments is that 1) I feel that there is a bit too much empty space from the left side of the photo... I would crop it a bit. 2) the area around the left eye is a bit dark that reminds me of make up (mostly below the eye). More experienced members will provide better advice, but these are my thoughts
 
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Nice photo. I like the background and the contrast with the head. A couple of comments is that 1) I feel that there is a bit too much empty space from the left side of the photo... I would crop it a bit. 2) the area around the left eye is a bit dark that reminds me of make up (mostly below the eye). More experienced members will provide better advice, but these are my thoughts

Thanks! I should have a reflector to bounce some light back onto his face, but I was by myself that day...actually most days when I shoot. I need to find a good high school student who wants to tag along and learn...and hold gears ;-)
 

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Nice photo. I like the background and the contrast with the head. A couple of comments is that 1) I feel that there is a bit too much empty space from the left side of the photo... I would crop it a bit. 2) the area around the left eye is a bit dark that reminds me of make up (mostly below the eye). More experienced members will provide better advice, but these are my thoughts

Hi and welcome to the forum from a fellow newbie to TPF. In my opinion the picture is fantastic! subjwct is good and depth of field is great, I probably wouldnt have noticed the dark space under the left eye only now it has been pointed out I do, but thats an easy fix.

Yes I agree that a crop should be made from the left but just a tiny little amount. any more and you will kill the shot... In my oppinion!
 

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