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[Fred Berg]

...........

 

[KenC]

I love this, except for the white band on the bottom.

 

[bribrius]

this is one of those cool ones...

 

[Borad]

The light makes it too contrived. I'd prefer a shadow of someone or something under to the left of the window, or even a painted disk where the light is.

 

[Fred Berg]

I love this, except for the white band on the bottom.

Thanks, Ken. I wasn't too sure about the white band (a window) either and am still weighing up whether to cut it out to print.

 

[Fred Berg]

this is one of those cool ones...

Thanks!

 

[Fred Berg]

The light makes it too contrived. I'd prefer a shadow of someone or something under to the left of the window, or even a painted disk where the light is.

For me, the light makes it surreal to some extent, which is what gave me the idea of turning it on its side to form an exclamation mark. A sort of statement beyond the visual boundaries, so to speak.