A Californian Sunset

[snaremop]

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[manaheim]

I don't think that quite worked, sorry. I don't know what constructive criticism to give, unfortunately... I think it was just a total miss. Can't even quite tell what was off.

 

[manaheim]

Well, yes, I gathered that from your title. My point was that there isn't enough in the image for me to be able to tell you how it didn't quite work.