I find the over exposure takes lots of details out of the photo, and can not see enough detail in with the branch, if the school girl is the subject, I would of moved the branch to the left so it would not interfere with the girl. If you scaned the image, I find it that the hues are too red.
If you wanted to show the branch and the girl, I would of used some fill flash for the branch so it would stand out of the dark tree in the background.