A few for C&C

[er111a]

thank you
#1

#2

#3

(I know)
#4

#5

#6

#7

#8

 

[er111a]

anyone?

 

[fokker]

#2 and #8 for me, show signs of improvement and consideration of composition, they look good. #3 is just bad, as you seem to already know. I'm also quite a fan of #7.

 

[sly677]

I like the first shot however I would crop the top part out, about 1/3 off the top...I find my eyes are drawn to the empty sky. 2 and 3 I find oversaturated and too much sky for no reason. Last one I also like but again I would crop about 1/3 off the top...You have some nice shots, I would suggest to shoot down(from higher vantage point) as opposed to up, to try and get rid of the empty sky.
Just my 2 cents...
Take care
Syl

 

[er111a]

thanks

 

[er111a]

bump for more c&C

 

[Bitter Jeweler]

You are getting better, er11a.

My favorite would be #7. I like the angles, lines, repetition of line. I like the processing, it adds to the cold and dirty feel to the image.

 

[Tulsa]

Getting better man.
I like the last one, I am not wild that the trees will not lighten up, is that the original you posted? I am in a editing mode tonight so I messed with it some.

 

[vd853]

i like 1, and i like it with that coloring.

 

[er111a]

thanks yall

 

[er111a]

You are getting better, er11a.

My favorite would be #7. I like the angles, lines, repetition of line. I like the processing, it adds to the cold and dirty feel to the image.

thank you