you did a good job on focus. The only photos that really stand out are 6 & 7. everything else seems kinda blah. try to find a way to really engage your subject with the surroundings.
I like number 2. It seems that they are all missing the "pop" factor. The color is a little bland in all of them. I also see skys blown in a couple.. : ) I think number 1 would have bee great if you had'nt cut off her toes. : ) Good work and thank you for sharing!