Yours looks very digital to me. I just shoot film when I want the film look. I think if it were possible to immulate film on digital, someone would have figured it out by now. I racked up hours of time I will never get back trying to do it. Just shoot film...
I suspect that part of that might be that you are much closer to film on a regular basis, but I do agree that I might need to bump the grain backup closer to the original preset level. This was a print of my daughter that was shot 42 years ago and processed in my darkroom. I can't remember the film, but likely Tri-x 400 as I bought it in bulk rolls, and only rarely shot Ilford. I can't remember the paper I used back then, but it was printed as an 8x10. It hung the on the wall of my office for several years, and was stored in a box in bottom of the drawer since. The print actually looks a little better then my cheap scanner produced and this is straight into a JPEG with no edits. I realize Tri-X and Ilford have a different look/feel, but still the tonal gradations are so much better with film.
I would go back to film except for two reasons. One - I've sunk so much into equipment and glass that I hate to go backward, and two - I'm a little on the lazy side. Film shooting takes effort both during the shot and after in processing. If I were to do it again, it would be with a full darkroom much like I had before. Having a raw file, that can produce color, b&w, or any number of options in between has certain advantages for me as someone who likes to experiment in real time.
I'm finding digital improvement a two edged sword. As I said earlier the better the equipment, the better the processing, the sharper, more realistic it becomes, but at what cost from an artistic standpoint. Digital can be unforgiving in it's representation especially on skin, having the ability to soften and bring back some of nostalgic look of the film era, I think has an advantage.