whoa! i like it. i don't know why though .... hmmm. the angle is interesting and the model is beautiful oh and the colors are pleasing to the eyes. i like it a lot! haha
Nice compostion, but your whitebalance is off and it could do with some sharpening. I am not one for using flash very often but I think it could done with some fill flash as well.
Yea it is a little warm, but that's not bad. It can work with this portrait. I don't think it looks bad. The only thing I would have done different is use a reflector or fill flash for the shadows on her face, but they aren't too bad. They're there, but not too dark.