Argiope Aurantia Spider, August 26, 2013

[Takeda]

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[BlueCobalt]

im not a fan of the first 2, in 1 the background is not blurred enough and when the bush ends all that dead space is distracting and taking over the shot. 3 and 4 are just snapshots, you should try working a different angle so you can see more of the face and eyes of the spider. as you shot them they dont really have any interest other then to keep the eye there for a second to see what it is then im on to the next one

 

[Takeda]

im not a fan of the first 2, in 1 the background is not blurred enough and when the bush ends all that dead space is distracting and taking over the shot. 3 and 4 are just snapshots, you should try working a different angle so you can see more of the face and eyes of the spider. as you shot them they dont really have any interest other then to keep the eye there for a second to see what it is then im on to the next one

Thank you for your critique!