Arianna

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by jake337, Nov 24, 2015.

  1. jake337

    jake337 Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Hadn't touched the camera for a couple weeks. There was some nice light the other morning and she was waiting for her breakfast.


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  2. The_Traveler

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    I would go back to the original and level the tones a lot.
    Without the color I don't think the tones here are very attractive.
    Note the very light flat areas (red) and the very dark areas (yellow).
     
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  3. cauzimme

    cauzimme No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    It would have been great tone for a woman, nostalgic looking, with more grains.
    But for a child, not very appropriate or interesting.
    As The_traveler said, level the tones, overall, I like the composition
     
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    More like this then?
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