hmm...I don't understand your critiquing approach?
The problem I'm having with the people like you who respond is this...you never talk about the final product. Whatever happened to the quality of something being based on how it satisfies the senses? Just because someone spends 8 hours on something doesn't mean that it's gonna be a great product. Just because it looks like someone spends 2 minutes on something doesn't mean it's not a great product.
I don't understand why people judge work based on what it took to get somewhere.
I'm not judging based on what it took to get there. I'm judging based on the final product....which looks like something my 2 year old son would draw on a piece of paper with some colored pencils. Sorry to sound harsh, but you asked for comments and that's my opinon.
For you to so drastically disagree......well, maybe you should look at the fact that hardly anybody else is replying and think to yourself what that means.
Again, it doesn't matter to me how it was made, it's the final product. If you think it works so great, then print a 20x30 and hang it over you couch....and don't ask for opinions next time if you are gonna get all butthurt when people don't like your stuff.