Well... it's very soft...I'm not sure if there is anything in the scene in focus...When you capture 95% of a subject in a frame you should most likely get 100% of the subject in the frame, you cut off the stem and the one appendage on the left for some reason I'm not sure... The items at the top center of the scene are distracting... and it's not an overly interesting, but you seem eager to do better... and I'm sure you will.