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Backstreets of Pushkar, India.

Paul Skinner

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This photo was taken on black & white film on a 645 format camera.
 

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I like this shot. It's very interesting. Something I wouldn't see in New Jersey. The tones are very nice. Good contrast and the range is full.

A minor point. You might crop off the right background. It seems to pull the eye away from the main action. I hope you didn't get too close to the snakes!
 
I tend to agree with Alan's observations. I think the background wall's edge, being right at the far edge, really exerts a lot of "pull" away from the women and the snakes. I think I would burn the girls' white clothing wayyyy down, to make it less eye-catching. That bit of white really pulls the eye away from all the dark tones.
 

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