Barn

[deepsun]

 

[oldhippy]

More is not always better. This feels busy to me. A few months ago I might not have said that, but stick around and see what works. Now when I shoot, I try to see the unwanted thing always looming to get in the pic. Nice try keep at it.

 

[eswebster]

I would try and get closer to the coup and play with the textures there while trying to get the barn and the trees in the distance, would require moving the trailer though. Agree with old hippy... too many distractions.

 

[deepsun]

I would try and get closer to the coup and play with the textures there while trying to get the barn and the trees in the distance, would require moving the trailer though. Agree with old hippy... too many distractions.

Thanks for the feedback! This might be hard to say without an example, but do you think it might work better to change my position relative to the coup and barn? If I stepped more to the left you would be able to see the broader side of the barn and less of what's right of the coup. I'll have to go back and try that.

 

[KenC]

I'd go close to the two smaller buildings and try to get just those (or parts of them) in the frame.

 

[TimothyJinx]

I like it - I would like it more with the barn framed a little to the left.

This maybe could work really well as an HDR shot.