BLACK n WHITE story

[Photoartomation]

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[Gavjenks]

Fantastic photo! I can almost always find something constructive to nitpick at the very least, if not significant suggestions. I've got nothing here, though. Seems successful all around.

I don't know which cropping you intended, since the two ways the website shows me the same file are different. I like the square-er one better. I'm less distracted by trying to think about what she's wearing and unimportant things like that than I am in the portrait version. Also square just fits the shape of the content-ful part of the image well.

Is that 6x9 MF film?

 

[timor]

Yes, your "sculpturing" with light is very good and you should exercise it more often. The only suggestion I would have for you is to find better angles for showing women's beauty. The soul of the humans is always in the eyes. Your picture is quite surrealistic, looks like frame taken from "Alien". Maybe that was your goal, I don't know, but as a standing alone portrait it looks strange to me. If there is the rest of the story, please, show to us.

 

[Gavjenks]

This photo would not be nearly as interesting if the eyes were visible.

 

[eswebster]

great photo, agree with gavjenks above. Thanks for sharing.

 

[timor]

This photo would not be nearly as interesting if the eyes were visible.

I agree, it is interesting, but to me in a strange way; no beginning, no end.