Burslem in the blue hour

[theraven]

Critique welcome, as always, please click the image to view on a black background and bigger!


Burslem at night by Raven Photography by Jenna Goodwin, on Flickr

 

[timor]

I like the combination of yummy blue and gold colors. There is some magic in the atmosphere of your capture. I just think that you should make it straight, the subject is too wide for the vertical convergence.

 

[Rick50]

Yes, combination of colors is good. Nice shot.

 

[theraven]

Cheers guys, I did try to straighten it but it just looked strange, I think because the war memorial is quite tall, it needs to be looked up at?

 

[Designer]

I like the combination of yummy blue and gold colors. There is some magic in the atmosphere of your capture. I just think that you should make it straight, the subject is too wide for the vertical convergence.

I think it is straight. Distortion due to the wide angle may make it appear not straight. I checked the leading corner of the war memorial and the lamp post, as those are the central elements..

 

[theraven]

Cheers for that, it does look straight, but maybe the line of the curb at the bottom makes it look wonky?

 

[wackii]

It looks leaning to the right to me.