C&C Please Dew on Spiderweb

[Muzzy00uk]

Hi All, thought i would have a little go at a black and white photo (first proper go). i think its come out ok but I'm sure there is room for improvement.

many thanks

 

[mmaria]

- background is killing the shot
- dof is too shallow for something I could look at as an abstract photo
- composition is not good
- what was your intention with this photo? what did you want a viewer to see/think?

jmho, others might disagree

 

[Muzzy00uk]

haha so what your saying is its rubbish

i was sort of going for an abstract feel but will give it another go. was windy so was struggling to get a shot in focus.

 

[mmaria]

haha so what your saying is its rubbish

I am saying that you'll learn quickly with that attitude

 

[Muzzy00uk]

haha so what your saying is its rubbish

I am saying that you'll learn quickly with that attitude

thats the reason I'm here. your experience and knowledge is invaluable for anyone starting out so i appreciate the honest opinion. better than being told its good when its not.

 

[mmaria]

well, if you stick around here long enough, you'll certainly learn a lot