C&C Please

[birdfish]

I've just started working with PSE 9. Any comments or critiques are much appreciated.

1. http://brandonbass.smugmug.com/Children/Andrew/i-xQphxvb/0/M/July-2011-051-copy-M.jpg

2. http://brandonbass.smugmug.com/Children/Andrew/i-b9Sg5Cj/0/M/July-2011-110-M.jpg

3. http://brandonbass.smugmug.com/Children/Andrew/i-j5MgDjn/0/M/July-2011-029-M.jpg

 

[johnh2005]

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[birdfish]

Thanks for the advice. Let me try again...

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[G. Ike]

1. I think this image might be stronger if the infant filled the entire frame. The vignette is a little strong for my personal taste, but that's just me. It looks a bit soft, you might want to up your shutter speed. It takes a very steady hand (and subject) to use a shutter speed like 1/30 with a 50mm lens.

2. This one also appears to be soft due to camera shake. I like the idea, but your masking could be better.

3. Nice composition, I wish I could see all of the baby's right eye but that's a little nitpicky. Your white balance appears quite warm.