C&C please

[tmjjk]

I am new to photography and also new to this forum. I would like to be able to post a photo or two for critiquing... Is this the proper place for that?

No, please start your own thread in the appropriate gallery.

 

[KmH]

The eyes are over processed and look very unnatural. I know many others do the same sort of editing.

I moved your post to the appropriate forum section.

 

[LuckySe7en]

the flash looks really harsh. it looks like the room was pitch black and you shot with your flash on full power. Keep shooting though