This would be the perfect place to have used a hard-edged Neutral Density filter to "hold back" the bright sky,and to allow the lake scene at the bottom to show up. As it is shown, the composition is unsuccessful--the dark lower 2/3 of the image is devoid of detail, which doesn't really bring us into the scene. it looks like sunset over the lake, but we can't see the lake. The position of the sun though seems about right for a vertical composition.
I might have tried going the other way, with only a small amount of dark space at the bottom of the frame, and the entire top of the photo filled with sky tones, with the sunset at the bottom left area maybe 1/4 of the way up from the bottom of the frame.