Couple Potrait C&C please - ATTN: D-B-J

[Foxx]

I took your critique to heart.

I hope this shot finds more favor with you

 

[SabrinaO]

What is that strange beam of light at the top of his head? I also see a lot of motion blur. They must have really been going at it...lol

Anyway.. what do you want CC'd? You def need a rim or hair light. You chopped off the top of his head. Use a faster SS or did you reach your synch speed?
Good job capturing the passion though

 

[mickmac]

The kiss looks forced. Like he is trying not to laugh while doing it. There is something weird at the back of his head. Is it her hand? There is no tongue. Where's the tongue damn it!

 

[SabrinaO]

He does look like hes laughing...his cheeks are balled up. But still I think its a great capture despite what I said earlier.

 

[MTVision]

It's still a cute pic of the OP and his wife/girlfriend!!!

 

[adrianakyan]

Great capture! looks natural! but yeah i see the blur..

 

[Foxx]

Sorry no tongue, I was trying to keep it softcore

The weird lighting is due to a lamppost off-center above us. I improvised on lighting and was just experimenting, it turned out better than I thought. I know the head is cut off and there is blur(lots of movement going on...) but of the shots I took this was the best. It was not a forced kiss, just surprising Still waiting for DBJ!

EDIT: Synch Speed is something I'm still grasping to understand...

I also attempted to diffuse my pop-up flash a bit by wrapping it in paper. Not sure if it worked or not...

 

[Vtec44]

Okay, now I need to go out to find a model that will let me do this to her.... without me getting punched in the face.

 

[pixilstudio]

the blue thing is a super easy fix with the heal tool or stamp. generally the pop up flash is worth less i would start saving for a real speed light

 

[Foxx]

the blue thing is a super easy fix with the heal tool or stamp. generally the pop up flash is worth less i would start saving for a real speed light

I didn't even realize what you were talking about, I had to go back up and examine the picture Thanks for pointing it out, will do!

 

[MissCream]

Unicorn!