couple shoot C & C please

[amber.martin]

some friends wanted new "engagement" pictures because they didnt like the ones they had done in a studio. they're already married but we kinda themed it toward engagement. this is my first run at this.. ive been taking into mind the advice given to me on past threads, and im HOPING im improving... the writing on the last one was the brides idea, she wanted it and i obeyed, im personally not crazy about because i think it takes away from the pictures.. please let me know what ya'll think thanks in advance

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see what i mean about the writing.. yuck! but i actually LIKE the picture itself.

 

[vtf]

Writing or not I like all the shots. #3 seems a little awkward for her, but I like them. I really have nothing critical to say.