Couple's Portrait, What do you think?

[Minhja]

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Please help me by critiquing the two photos. Please leave comments about the good aspects of the specific photos and the areas for improvements. Thank you!

If you want me to comment on your photos, please leave a link. I always enjoy looking at other people's work.

 

[DiskoJoe]

Both are overexposed and cropped a little too tight. Pan out a little bit and maybe try using a smaller aperture.

 

[kundalini]

#1 - Man's feet too close to the edge of the frame. Negative space on the left of frame too bright and couple also. There should be some contrast between the two.

#2 - Fix the tilt. Both have their far eyeball on the edge of their face. It is better to have the eye shown within the face (2/3 mask) or none at all (profile).

 

[Minhja]

Thanks, I will keep that in mind for future shoots