Critique This!

[ibmike150]

Here are a some shots I have taken over the past few months, most of them are time exposures of 10min+. looking to increase my skills and improve the quality of my photography.

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[dxqcanada]

Too many images !!

I find that #2 is the only good shot.
Exposure is good, and the sense of speeding train in an empty station is translated very well.

 

[MK3Brent]

#2 is tits.

#8 has some serious potential with some different lighting to add dimension on the subject.
It's really close as is.

Actually #8 is great as is... I take it back.
Do a large print of it.

 

[Mike Lamb]

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[ibmike150]

#2 is tits.

#8 has some serious potential with some different lighting to add dimension on the subject.
It's really close as is.

Actually #8 is great as is... I take it back.
Do a large print of it.

Yeah I've played around with it (now image 5), and this was the best I've come up with from the raw image, i would like to reshoot this with a different light, i used my cellphone to light this originally.