As far critique goes I think I agree it would be better in the baby was in focus...also more vibrant colors would add to it as well. The colors are just sort of bland. I know you probably won't be able to reshoot this, but I think maybe it would have been cool to try focusing on the baby, and have the mother blurred a bit, sort of opposite of what you've done. Unique shot though, not something you get to see everyday that's for sure.