Dominoes

[SamSpade1941]

 

[KenC]

Interesting idea. I like the door being cropped. There just isn't enough on the left side to really make it work well for me. There's also some barrel distortion, but that's easy to fix.

 

[sleist]

I think I would have just included the dark bricks and the word DOMINOES.
The bricks look like dominoes - sort of.

The cropped door and the uncorrected distortion are distractions I think.

 

[JoshuaSimPhotography]

Yeah, I think the barrel distortion is bait distracting