I like the idea and the use of BW. The softness bothers me a little. I don't think everything needs to be perfectly sharp, but this would look better if it were a little sharper. I also would like to see all of the doors on the sides.
I agree with Ken about the softness, and I find the reflections rather distracting as well, personally. Nice B&W conversion though, and I think the 1:1 crop works well for it.