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BrandonSCMedia

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Nikon D3100 18-55MM Kit lens

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The second one is nicely done, the perspective distortion really adds.

The first and the third are OK but fairly pointless.
I suggest that in the future, you pick the best one, or maybe two, and post that larger.
It's impossible to say anything really helpful about tiny pictures
 
Okay for sure thank you very much.

The second one is nicely done, the perspective distortion really adds.

The first and the third are OK but fairly pointless.
I suggest that in the future, you pick the best one, or maybe two, and post that larger.
It's impossible to say anything really helpful about tiny pictures
 
I should have added that the second one is really nice specifically because you include less modern buildings, a light post and trees that both give an idea of scale and make a contrast with the glitzy new building.

In the first, there's no real idea of what you are trying to show us and the shadows just obscure the front without adding anything much.
In the third, you're showing us the height of the building, using the composition and perspective distortion but it's neither very high nor attractive or interesting.

Try thinking through exactly what is interesting about the shot and then building your composition around that.
One out of three, good start.
I would be happy with that hit rate.

Lew
 

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