pascalriben
TPF Noob!
- Joined
- Sep 1, 2010
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- Chiang Mai, Thailand
- Can others edit my Photos
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Why is it that you are always posting links to your own work in other people's threads? The original image posted by the artist isn't even nude yet you find a way to lead it that way and then you post your own nude work. Personally I think this is really inconsiderate of you.It is OK, nothing exciting.
I like your shadow shot with your girls bush much, much better. That was your finest shadow work.
Arthur Tress did a lot of shadow work like you do. I like a shadow shot here or there. But when you submit lesser works it diminishes your great shots. Gotto get onto something new.
Try some nudes of your gal. Get a look at
Ralph Gibson, Nude: Eric Fischl, Ralph Gibson: 9783836528269: Amazon.com: Books
A classic in this area.
Here is what I am working on now.
(nude warning)
freezingtime
Hopefully book will be proofed and done within a couple months. I have 10 books planned. 4 already are shot. But the rest of the books depend on people cooperating for the pix. That is a biggy nowadays...people cooperating. Without people I'd be shooting, bugs, birds, sunsets and running water that looks like smoke.
It is OK, nothing exciting.
I like your shadow shot with your girls bush much, much better. That was your finest shadow work.
Arthur Tress did a lot of shadow work like you do. I like a shadow shot here or there. But when you submit lesser works it diminishes your great shots. Gotto get onto something new.
Try some nudes of your gal. Get a look at
Ralph Gibson, Nude: Eric Fischl, Ralph Gibson: 9783836528269: Amazon.com: Books
A classic in this area.
Here is what I am working on now.
(nude warning)
freezingtime
Hopefully book will be proofed and done within a couple months. I have 10 books planned. 4 already are shot. But the rest of the books depend on people cooperating for the pix. That is a biggy nowadays...people cooperating. Without people I'd be shooting, bugs, birds, sunsets and running water that looks like smoke.
Side Note: Click that Amazon link^ and your amazon browsing suggestions will be changed for the better!
@Pascal: I really like this. I love the lines, they keep me looking at this, and all three of the main subjects that I see [the girls legs, the shadow and the caution pylon] seem to work well together. What I love about your shadow is the way it includes the presence of the photographer in the shot. It works well for this in my opinion.
I like the third figure, the cartoon on the CAUTION pylon. I think it pulls it all together. I'd consider a very mild crop to balance the three figures a little better, but generally I like the overall design here.
Well done!
Wow so much going on there. Nice!